Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool & Rule Academy:

The last part of the story was written in part o, where Daisy leaves the Academy and returns home with her owners. So far, I have begun re-touching the first part of the story because the entire story is lengthy and it has been going alright. The words will need to be rephrased as well because this is meant to be a fictional story for children and on top of that, pictures will be included.

The first part I need to complete is to re-write the story. Make it shorter and more appealing to the audience.

The second part is adding photographs to the book. Pictures also keep children interested in the story.

Lastly, the book and pages will have to be combined into two separate pages, which will take lots of time and corrections before it is published.

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Writing a Short Story part O-Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy:

It’s her final day at the mansion and she gathers around everyone to say her final goodbyes before heading home. Her items were packed in a pink suitcase and her blankets with a pillow were placed in a yellow duffel bag. At once, Daisy has recovered well with her broken leg but is saddened to see everyone else stay behind while she has to go home with her owners.

She admits that even though she got hit by a truck which was a painful experience she will never forget, she does not regret coming to the mansion and recuperate in a different environment where she felt safe, pampered and making friends that will last a lifetime. “Goodbye Iceman,” Daisy said before exiting the Academy. Iceman ran up, gave her a hug and handed her his phone number. Foxy also did the same thing and so did everyone else.

Her owners didn’t have to pay due to the truck driver being sincere, generous and paid all of their vet expenses. As she departed Dogs Drool and Rule Academy, she turned around, barked at her friends and was on her journey back to Bridgetown, Tennessee to live and lead a happy life.

The End

 

Writing a Short Story part N-Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy:

It’s one more week before Daisy gets to leave and she is having the best time of her life at the Academy. She’s made friends with the other animals who are also recovering from injuries they endured and she also befriended the staff. On top of that, her broken leg is almost healed to the point where she will have her cast removed next Monday.

Daisy teared up because she is leaving the mansion soon and wants to enjoy her time as much as she can without time flying by on a constant basis. It was six at night and she had dinner with her roommates. They all had a conversation about their reasons for arriving at the mansion and why some of them have to stay there for a little bit longer than others. It depends on how bad your injury is and where it is located at, on the body.

Writing a Short Story part M-Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy:

Two weeks flew by quickly and Daisy is healing at a stable rate. She is receiving physical therapy three times a week and playing sports outside with her buddies. Her leg is still hurting, but she is continuing to take her pain medicine on time. Since she has been at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy for over two weeks, she has been treated by the staff like a queen and has been humble to everyone around her.

Her experience, overall, has been satisfactory and will recommend it when she comes back home to see her brothers and sisters if they ever became injured. The vets spoil the injured animals and physical therapists help them gain their strength back: through determination and with a positive attitude.

 

 

Writing a Short Story part L-Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy:

After Foxy hit the ball, two more players came up to the mound and tried to score some runs. Unfortunately, they struck out and the other team scored more runs in, concluding that they won the game for the day. After softball, the dogs and cats ran back into the mansion to watch television for one hour before going to physical therapy.

During physical therapy, the doctor asked Daisy what caused her injury and she explained to him that a truck driver ran over her leg and it broke instantly. The doctor stretched her leg out twice, as well as giving her some pain medicine before going to bed. Later that night, Daisy ate her meal, took her pain medicine and fell asleep within thirty minutes.

Writing a Short Story part K-Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy:

Daisy’s now up to bat and ready to hit the ball over the fence. As she stepped up to the mound, the pitcher from the other team threw a curve ball and she hit it to right field. She ran as fast as she could and made it to second base. One point earned by Iceman and the next player up to score is Foxy, a Pomeranian who also came from Bridgetown, Tennessee. Foxy came to the mansion because she had seizures and the only place affordable for her owners to take her was at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy.

Foxy stood at the mound, grabbed her bat and looked towards the pitcher. As soon as the ball came towards her, she hit it and it went over the fence. Both teams were tied and the amount of points they were allowed to reach that day was 10.

Writing a Short Story part J-Daisy’s One Month Stay at Dogs Drool and Rule Academy:

The first group up to bat scored three runs and one player struck out. The next two players hit the ball, but were caught by Daisy’s teammates. Now her team is up to the plate and ready to score some runs. The first member walking up and ready to hit the ball is Bullet, a Shih Tzu Pomeranian from Walker County, Tennessee. Bullet came to Dogs Drool & Rule Academy due to his back legs being ran over by a pickup truck and it was the closest place where he can recover quickly while his owners are away on business for one month. He has been at the mansion for three weeks now and his legs are healing at a steady rate. Due to his back legs being in casts, he will need to have one of his pals run for him. Daisy stepped up and volunteered to run for him while he hits the ball with his front paws.

Unfortunately, Bullet struck out and as a result, Daisy didn’t run for him. One player out, two more to go. Iceman, another team member, practiced his swing before running up the plate. On the first pitch, he hit the ball to left field and made it to third base because one of the players on the other team was struggling to pick up the ball and throw it to short stop.